The light orange and yellow sky rises up like the tide came rushing in It was magnificent .
Out of nowhere a humongous gorilla that was dark grey and had soft eyes but it looked like it had been in a fight with a big tiger. I thought it was herry beast. It came charging at a rusty old black nosy car with a big crash.
The rusty old black car Crumble to Pieces like a rocky mountain brock.
I felt Frightened. soft wind was swishing in my face I Froze in fer. The Nature was a very large Sound.
I think it look cool do you think it is cool let me no if you like it down below bye.😁
I really like the words you use for the describing words. How much describing words did you use?.
ReplyDeleteThank you and I used ..... I don't no how much I used maybe 17 or something have a magnificent day bye.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Freya it is Michaela here I like the way that you describe about the sky. When I was reading it your story had good interesting words. Maybe next you can proofread your top sentence but it is a good blog post.
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