I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, 23 December 2019
Activity 2: The Right to an Education (week 2)
Hey guys welcome back to another blog post. Today's blog post is going to be a story. The story is about a girl being scared of sea creatures. So no ore spoilers and let's start. One sunny bright day there was a small little girl with black and white tights with a pink line at the top of the tights and a fluffy pink top with blue glitter on it. She also has golden brown wavy hair. For her sisters 16th birthday they went to the beach. But for some reason her sister pushed her in the water . But then she saw a baby dolphin and she fell in love. The next day she did some research and from then she loved e creatures and learnt some much more fascinating stuff she also help them. Anyway guys that's all for today hope you like my short story BYE!!!
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Kia ora Freya,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on completing another Summer Learning Journey activity - keep up the good work. Don’t forget to comment back to blog commenters as well as on others SLJ blog posts to gain extra points.
What a great story you have written. I really like the way you have used your imagination in your story and that you have been really descriptive about the characters.
Dolphins are so cool and really smart, did you know that? Do you like dolphins? What is your favourite animal?
Until next time, happy blogging :)
Emma